Friday 1 July 2011

Writing

For writing this Thursday we watched a video of a rocket taking off and then wrote about this.  Children were encouraged to write about the detail of the takeoff.  Here are a few great pieces of writing.

I am flying in the rocket.  The flames take me up.  By Jacob C

Fire shoots out of the rocket.  Little pieces of flame fall down the rocket.  The rocket powers up into space.  It is going to the moon.  By Angelina

I saw the fire come out of the back.  I saw ash dropping down up in space. I saw orange fire coming from space.  By Seth

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